Landing Page Copywriter
I write landing pages for service businesses that have traffic but no calls. Stop guessing what's wrong, send the URL and know in 48 hours.
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"We started with 20 inquiries a month. Calls started coming in as soon as the pages went live. The volume kept growing from there, and now 45 clients a month, +125% lead volume."
What is the First Read?
When the traffic is real but the calls aren't, the answer is somewhere on the page.
You send the URL. I go through the page the way a first-time visitor does — from the first sentence to the moment they decide to call or leave.
You get a video walkthrough and a written summary in the same email. Both within 48 hours.
The summary tells you what's stopping people from calling, what to fix first, and why. Specific enough to act on without guessing.
Send your URLWhy this works?
Every click that didn't call was a dollar paid for traffic that went nowhere.
Businesses that contact me have already spent money. New ads, a rebuilt page, sometimes both. The calls stayed the same.
The dashboard kept showing clicks. The phone said something else. The problem in every case was the page.
It sat between the ad and the call and had never been read from the outside, the way a stranger reads it, starting from nothing, deciding in seconds whether to call or leave.
That's what the First Read does.
FAQ
What happens after I send the URL?
Fill in your URL, name, and email. Pay. Video and summary arrive in 48 hours.
How much does it cost?
€299. One payment.
Is this just feedback, or will you fix it?
You get a clear picture of what's wrong and what to fix first. Rewriting is a separate service.
How is this different from an SEO audit?
An SEO audit looks at rankings. This looks at why visitors don't call.
What if I have questions after watching?
Reply to the email. I answer.
You've already paid for the traffic. Let the page turn it into calls.
You're good at the work. The page should be good at getting you more of it. Stop guessing what's wrong.
Send the URL and know in 48 hours.
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